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April 12, 2010
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That's a piece I made for an event that will happen through the Art School I work.

For Iron Man 2 Movie everyone's waiting! The best of Marvel based movies, in my opinion!

LineArt and Colors by Me: :iconstriderden:

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Critique by =ZackRI Apr 13, 2010, 12:16:12 PM
While not a bad piece I have two main issues with the piece.


First, Your light sources seem muddled.
Example: You have War Machine's chest glow not effecting Iron man's armor, or barely effecting the characters at all.
Your Background light is warmer than your foreground light which flattens the characters.

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If you look at the reference, (given it's from the movie)
Though you have a fairly cool light source, coming from the left, his chest bulb still gives off enough light to effect the chest plate. and the light recedes into a even cooler red pushing his form out.

Warm to Cool is how you do it in more cases. (depending on your light sources... if it's different get reference)

Secondly,
My other issue with this piece is your rendering of the metal. Referring back to the link i posted if you look at how the light reflects on the armor, it's not all soft. I feel like i should be seeing the light effecting the plates of his armor differently, not like you have as a couple of white highlights. You need to choose what your main light source is and stick with it. Then you can have auxiliary sources and then your ambient. Also you should look at how real metal is lit, not how you think it is.

It's a bit too shiny for shiny's sake not to mention out of place considering the background, but all things considered it's not a bad piece and while it could use work I think you can learn from this.
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!Figaro-8 Aug 23, 2010
Really nice job on this!

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Figaro

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*StriderDen Aug 23, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!

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~dragonair907 May 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, this is amazing!
Great job! ^^

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*StriderDen May 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!

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~LaisLeite Apr 14, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
To loca pra ver o filme. Parece que tudo saiu perfeito nesse filme, Chicote negro e a máquina de combate sem conta o própio iron man, que no 1 ja tava muito bom.
Onde será a exposição?
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*StriderDen Apr 14, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Do que me lembro, vai ser lá na entrada do Kinoplex!
Off: Que mundo pequeno, fui dar uma olhada na sua galeria, você conhece o Sidnei haha! (A cara dele é inconfundível :p )

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~LaisLeite Apr 14, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Muito inconfundível. hauhaua
Vou aparecer por la no dia, sabe de data?
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*StriderDen Apr 14, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Não sei exatamente, mas muito provavelmente vai ficar lá por um tempo, depois da estréia do filme.

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~LaisLeite Apr 14, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
hum!
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*KYLE-CHANEY Apr 13, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I DIG IT.
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